I can smell burning.
It’s not just like a lit matchstick, it’s so much bigger, something as big as a house.
” Mum,” I call, but nothing.
“MUM!” A little louder, but still nothing.
Maybe she went to the pub, she’s been doing that a lot lately.
“Dad,” I call.
“DAD!!!” I wail, they wouldn’t just leave me alone like this. They couldn’t.
I rang nan but she didn’t listen. She thought I was pranking her! This time I really wasn’t.
I crept down the stairs to see what was going on. It was getting warmer and I was getting scared.
Ccreeeaaaak!
I got a terrifying feeling, and then I saw a bright light.
A burning mass of flames.
This is superb Phoebe. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it 🙂
Miss Pallister
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it!
This is a great piece of writing phoebe loved it .It was great 🙂 it was one of the best pieces of writing I have ever read
Thanks! 🙂
That’s one of the nicest comments I’ve ever had!
Your’s was great too!
That was great!I actually want to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this.
Thankyou! 😀
Your 100 word challenge is now entered Phoebe. Check on 100wc.net
Miss P
I really enjoyed reading it as well.
That was amazing Phoebe i have got a thought that her mum and dad are in the fire but that might not be what actually happens but i thought you put that prompt in really well because it was very tricky i had struggled.
It was very good Phoebe, I liked your vocabulary!
This is Fantastic! Its really engaging.
Great piece of writing Pheobe.
What brilliant writing Phoebe, I love the imagery you have used in your short story. Well done